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A Writer's Diary · Jul 17, 2026

Can You Use These POVs Better Than I Can?

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There's a challenge for you

In writing the Complete Guide to Point of View, I’ve sometimes been forced to come up with my own examples. That is, to write a story to demonstrate a particularly obscure POV.

Third Person Plural Past Tense (They went...).

I’m sure there are examples of all of them, out there somewhere, but perhaps not for a full page.

Why don’t you read what I’ve managed, then have a go of your own? See if you can do better. (I’m sure you can.)

Here the examples are, as a freebie —

A Complete Guide To Point Of View By Toby Litt For Substack July 2026
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And have a go at writing in some of the weirder ones.

If you like the results, put what you’ve written in the Comments.

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