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man of aran · Jul 24, 2026

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This postcard from 1969 is unique as every millimetre of space on the back is taken up with text. With that, what else could I do but start erasing? But my attempt at an ‘erasure poem’ ended being more a subtraction-addition poem because I added my own lines, those in italics, which I guess is breaking the rules. Oh well, it’s what I did. .

NOTE: The card depicts Mayan ruins in Palenque, Mexico. The Mayan civilization lasted from approx. 2000BC to 1700AD. Mayan scribes wrote their glyphs under the patronage of the gods on stone and fig bark paper. The paper was used to create folded books, or codices. Tragically, thousands were burned by Spanish conquistadors and priests. Only four are know to exist today.

Mayan ruins at Palenque, Mexico, in 1969 (non-erased words and letters highlighted)

Text within this block will maintain its original spacing when published


Me, minion
For you, ahau,*
the glad news:
my chance to serve
has arrived.

I would love success
in paper work,
opportunity,
openings:
to be your scribe.
If I am not
too old,
I prefer
standing,
advantage,
to home.
The maize gods
seek an an answer. 
But I think I should
have, and be about,
many things—
all things to be
blessed by you. 
- - -
*ahau (aka, ajaw) = 'lord' or 'king' in several Mayan languages

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