A sentence that opens with a prepositional phrase followed by an object. Should the object serve as the subject of the sentence instead?

I made an editorial change that the author won't change because "it means the same thing." Her sentence: Under section 16-90-111, a finding is clearly erroneous when, although there is evidence to support it, the appellate court, after reviewing the entire evidence, is left with the definite and firm conviction that a mistake has been made. Millsap v. State, 2025 Ark. 38. My edit: A finding under…