Ten More Tangible Tips for Editing Your RPG Manuscript

Remove instances of here from location descriptions—it’s obvious you’re describing the location already. Instead of “ A hobgoblin hammers iron here,” write “ A hobgoblin hammers iron on an anvil.” For the same reason, remove instances of this in description entries. If you must reference the entry’s subject, use “ the.” Instead of “ Smoke fills this room,” write “ Smoke fills the room,” or better…