Ten Tangible Tips For Editing Your RPG Manuscript

Remove instances of “ to be” verbs: be, am, is, are, was, were, being, and been. Instead of “ The goblin is dancing,” write “ The goblin dances.” In most cases, this also includes the added benefit of changing the passive voice into the active voice. In cases like “ The goblin is wet,” instead say “ Water drips down the goblin,” or simply “ The wet goblin…” Remove instances of “ to have” verbs:…