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Storytelling and Ghostwriting · Sep 5, 2025

The Weight in The Jar

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Poppy Sindral - Storyteller · Storytelling and Ghostwriting

Her truck took the tight turns of the mountain road with ease. She hadn’t driven this road in years. Not since the falling leaves started whispering again.

Each switchback unfurled its orange and rust-colored arms toward her, the treetops shedding the way skin peels after sunburn. Fall here was a dramatic undoing.

In the truck's passenger seat sat the jar, containing river water, string, a piece of bone, two silver coins, and a strand of her sister’s hair.

The air smelled of transformation.

Her hands clung tight to the wheel.

She hadn’t come to mourn. Not really.

At the base of the slope was the house: squat, stony, barely changed. Vines had overtaken the left side. The mailbox still bore their father’s name.

She parked. Killed the engine.

No birds. Just the hush of falling things.

She didn't knock. She'd not been invited.

The door opened easily. The house knew her.

Inside there was a man seated at the kitchen table. Pale eyes, staring.

“You waited,” she said.

“I knew you’d come.”

He gestured to the second chair. She didn't sit.

“You have it?”

She placed the jar on the table. It didn't look like much. But that wasn’t the point.

He looked at it thoroughly. Then at her.

“You’re sure?”

“She was six. You took her from our bed.”

“I was summoned,” he said. “By someone in this house.”

Her lips twitched. She said nothing.

He pushed the jar toward her. “Then you do it.”

She reached into her bag and pulled out the last item: a feather. Burnt black. The kind that only falls during the thinning of the year.

She dropped it in the jar.

The room bent. Walls warped inward. The floor rolled like sleep under a blanket.

The jar began to pulse, its contents shifting, catching the dim light.

Something inside it stirred.

She heard laughter, brief, bright, her sister’s. The man was no longer there. Or he was, but younger, smaller. His hands were not hands anymore. They were twigs. Or roots. Or shadow.

“You should not have come alone,” the house said.

But she was not alone.

The laughter came again, closer now. A small figure stepped from the hallway. A girl in a yellow shirt. Hair in puffs.

“Samaka,” she whispered.

The girl didn’t speak. Just stood. Watching. Like she had that day in the river.

She opened her arms.

The girl stepped forward. Slowly. Leaves scattered around her like dry embers.

When the girl touched her, skin cold and soft, Sade remembered the first time she held her in the hospital, before the light-bulbs shattered, before the blood on the tiles, before the silence swallowed their parents whole.

The jar cracked.

The girl blinked.

“I’m hungry,” she said.

Sade laughed. It came out like a sob.

“I’ll make jollof.”

“Will you add plantain?”

“Too much.”

The girl smiled.

Outside, the mountain exhaled.

Sade got back in the truck and started the engine.

The house settled and the trees, as if in response, let go of their last golden leaves.

Read the original on poppysindral.substack.com

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