really delightful read miyuu and chinatsu are so much fun to watch as the "no this time FOR SURE" optimism of their rekindled relationship abrades back into the same old shit again (though they cant help but be together anyways) the aesthetic of the game works surprisingly well too i like the retro nostalgia of the soft colorful ui and cute sprites and how they juxtapose with the exhausted irritability of the characters (especially chinatsu shes sooo gap moe i totally get how miyuu fell for it again for her lol) thank you for sharing and i bet this time for sure for real one hundred percent itll work out between them and theyll even find potato !!!!
the character sprites and the ui for this is delicious... love the callback to classic 2000s bishojo games (the music too carries that feeling across well.) super-solid prose and dialogue too. love miyuu and chinatsu's push-pull dynamic and how it's unclear if they'll improve together or repeat the same mistakes they made last time.
good stuff all around!
thank you so much for taking the time to read it!! it was my first time taking writing seriously and having any idea what "prose" was at all lol 😭 i'm very glad that even with the short time, the magnetism (in both ways) between the two of them shone through to you :) and for the visuals, it's all what i'm drawn to the most, and it's my mission to make bishoujo games live on forever! 🫡
this was a lot of fun. i love the ui a lot, and making the game 600x800 is such a good touch.
miyuu and chinatsu are a joy to watch crash into each other. two girls who shouldn't be together but can't be apart is a great dynamic.
HII I LOVED READING THIS. First off the UI and artwork is absolutely gorgeous, it really reminds me of the 2000s growing up as well as all the random Nightcore videos I used to watch on Youtube lol.
The character dynamics were really good as well. The way Miyuu and Chinatsu keep pushing each other way was really tense but in a way thats intriguing to watch. The ending was really good, especially because as someone else has pointed out you're not entirely sure if they're actually going to change after this or if its just empty reassurance said in the heat of the moment. This was really fun to read!
i'm really touched you took the time to read it!!! 😭💖 your compliments are so touching & i've been thinking all day about how to respond to them. all i can say is thank you!!! it makes me really happy you enjoyed the experience and you loved my art 🥹
Really loved the presentation on this! Love the cute artstyle and older moe aesthetics contrasting everything else.
i really, really enjoyed this. i was drawn to the art style right off the bat, and the cute moe style coupled with real world troubles, traumas, relationships...all hit really good! great combination to work with, i like that the ending can be read as either another empty promise or like real hope for the future. great work!
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