RSS Amplifier

Singing, each to each · May 22, 2026

The Echo

0
Sign in to vote or save

Melanie Bettinelli · Singing, each to each

No photo description available.
"The Echo" by Ellen Thesleff, 1891.

Text within this block will maintain its original spacing when published

The rose-gold world
resounds with end
of day gladness:
sky stretched canvas
tautly waiting
for calling crows,
starlings winging
home to their roosts,
robin redbreasts
serenading.
The grass’s green
a-glimmer with gilt.
Sentinel trees
darken their cloaks,
looming, shoulder
to shoulder, black
and grey shadows
ringing the field.
Sun-warmed field where
She, unaware
that she glows gold
and pink, caught now
in this moment
between day's death
and night's dark-birth,
brandishes her
silvered stick-stave.
She calls out, full-
voiced, into the
bird-haunted dusk,
joining her song
to the twilight
chorus. Now let
the echoes come.


A revision of a poem I originally wrote in 2020.

The girl in this painting could be a portrait of my oldest daughter, often seen at this age with stick in hand, lover of birds, singer of songs, utterly unselfconscious.

This poem is a tribute to B, my little chickadee who turned twenty this week.

Read the original on melaniebettinelli.substack.com

Comments

Nothing yet. Say the first thing.

    Sign in to join the conversation.