Yes, this is coming in a bit late, but I’ve been away on holidays with my kids and attending a whack of grad festivities for my eldest daughter! (My, my! Are there ever a lot of grad events for high school kids these days!)
Each month, I provide a separate newsletter for paid subscribers featuring a query letter critique sent in by paid subscribers. I’ve decided to expand this to also be for a first page critique! Going forward, if you’re a paid subscriber, not only do have access to the chat feature, but you’ll also have the chance to submit your query letter or the first double-spaced page of your manuscript to get feedback on it.
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This month’s query is for a SFF manuscript, and my three main notes are about comp titles, plot paragraph details, and bio paragraph details. Ensuring agents have enough compelling information to give them a clear picture in their head of what the story is about is uber important! Overall though, this sounds like a really cool story, and it’s written with confidence.
Let’s get started!
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