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Greg’s Newsletter · Nov 26, 2022

Brief Notes on Middle-Grade Voice

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Greg van Eekhout · Greg’s Newsletter

I thought I might start posting writing craft tips. I don’t have the time or energy to write actual articles or essays, but I can summon up enough goomph to grab some bullet points from various talks and presentations I’ve given. Below is a bit on voice from a Zoom talk I recently gave to the creative writing program at the University of British Columbia. 

One of the things that distinguishes middle-grade fiction from other age categories is voice. Here’re a few bullet points to consider when writing for kids, when analyzing voice, and when developing your own voice:

  • Dialog is not voice.

  • Dialog is a reflection, but not a complete revelation, of interior thoughts and feelings and attitudes.

  • Dialog is how characters talk, but voice permeates every aspect of writing, from description to narrative.

  • Dialog is what comes from the mouth. Voice is what comes from the writer’s brain and heart.

  • How does a pre-teen see the world?

  • How does a pre-teen see themself?

  • What is a pre-teen’s emotional vocabulary?

  • What questions does a pre-teen ask about the world and the way it works?

  • Focus less on what kids sound like than on what it feels like to be a kid.

  • Still don’t know what middle-grade voice is? Read ten recent middle-grade books to get a hint.

Love,
Greg van Eekhout

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